The following post is a copy critique (I offered this to the first 100 people to sign up for my brother’s traffic service.)
This is another squeeze page, which also means a shorter critique. But the changes I’ve suggested will change David’s entire business around, I believe!
Watch below to see what I suggest to David to improve his conversions:
…and again. please excuse the noise in the back.
I hope this helps!
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