The following post is a copy critique (I offered this to the first 100 people to sign up for my brother’s traffic service.)
Because this is just a squeeze page, the critique isn’t super long… but I do think that these changes will increase opt-in rates in a HUGE way.
Watch below to see what I suggest to Tony to improve his conversions:
…Please excuse the noise in the back… I figured it would be better to get this out with some background noise than to wait and have nothing!